Raising a Villain Went Wrong (Completed Main Story) - Chapter 11
“Young Master, that’s…”
The steward was about to say something with a stiffened face.
From far away, commotion surged like a wave.
“The Clan Head is coming!”
It was the long-awaited return of Dan Mok Su, the clan head they’d been waiting for three days.
Unlike my flustered self, Dan Mok Bi tugged my arm as if he had no interest at all.
“…Let’s go.”
Go back? Of course we should go back. I’m grateful he came personally to fetch me, after all.
“Just a moment, Young Master. I need to take my share of the work before we leave.”
I worked hard for three whole days! All for some delicious food!
When I stood my ground and refused to be dragged away by Dan Mok Bi, the steward slapped my shoulder with a face gone pale.
“Hey, you clueless thing!”
“What do you mean clueless! I worked myself to the bone for three days! Of course I should take my share!”
“Ugh, the Clan Head is coming!”
Muttering under his breath, the steward snatched a tray covered with a cloth from a passing servant and thrust it toward me.
“Take it! Take it! Just take the whole tray!”
“Wait, Steward! That’s meant for the Clan Head’s room.”
The servant cried out in alarm and tried to stop him, but when the steward glared fiercely, the servant quietly backed down.
‘Yes! It’s heavy! And it smells delicious.’
What a windfall! Since it’s a tray meant for the Clan Head, it must be filled with tasty food.
As I took the tray, I recognized the servant who’d been carrying it—it was the older sister who shared my room.
She glanced at Dan Mok Bi and whispered softly,
“Hey, Yeon-ah, are you alright?”
“Huh? What do you mean?”
“That person over there…”
Just as I was about to turn and look blankly at Dan Mok Bi again after hearing her, the steward shouted at me once more.
“Hurry up! Go quickly!”
“Oh dear, I’m going already!”
I couldn’t understand why this man was in such a rush. Humming a tune, I carried the tray back to the annex with Dan Mok Bi.
In truth, Dan Mok Bi didn’t utter a word the whole way, but I didn’t really mind. He was naturally quiet, after all.
It wasn’t until we reached Dan Mok Bi’s quarters that I realized something was wrong.
Just as I set the tray down and began preparing to eat, Dan Mok Bi grabbed my wrist.
“…Where were you?”
His hand gripping my wrist trembled slightly with tension. I was momentarily startled by the size of his broad, long fingers, then bit my lip upon seeing the desperate look in his eyes as he stared at me.
Dan Mok Bi wore an exhausted, haggard expression, like a lost child.
‘He must have worried about me a lot.’
Could it be that no one told him what I’d been doing for the past three days? I answered with an awkward smile.
“They said they needed to hold a feast for the Clan Head’s return. They claimed they were short on hands.”
“Why would you do such work?”
His low, growling voice sounded dangerously threatening. I thought what was only natural.
‘Right. This is Dan Mok Bi.’
The ultimate villain of the original story—the one who commits unspeakably cruel atrocities.
It wasn’t that Dan Mok Bi was always gentle and quiet; rather, it meant that within him lay the energy to plot such wickedness.
At this rate, I might unintentionally nurture him into a budding villain.
‘If I were him, I’d be angry too if a servant I’d lived with for three days suddenly vanished without a word.’
He must care about me deeply to react this way. I hunched my shoulders and let out a pained sound.
“Ah, it hurts.”
“…!!”
The moment I spoke, Dan Mok Bi’s grip on my wrist loosened. His eyes drooped apologetically, as if he’d never been angry at all.
“I—I’m sorry. I was just so startled…”
Trending
Seeing him like this, I almost wanted to ruffle his hair—but that’d be overstepping, wouldn’t it? To show I wasn’t angry, I exaggerated even more loudly.
“I was dragged away! It wasn’t my choice! Do you think I wanted to work? Look—while peeling garlic, I peeled off my own skin too!”
It wasn’t a joke—peeling so much garlic had genuinely softened and reddened my fingertips. A small spark flared in Dan Mok Bi’s dark eyes as he saw my hands.
“Who ordered you to do that?”
“They said all the servants gather to work together. They always prepare grandly like this whenever the Clan Head and the eldest young master return.”
“…”
Dan Mok Bi clamped his mouth shut. It was only natural he wouldn’t know—he’d always been confined.
I chuckled softly and carefully lifted the cloth. Magnificent dishes were revealed on the tray. Braised meat in soy sauce, various seasoned side dishes, and fruits I’d never seen before made my mouth water instantly.
“Wow, even so, getting such delicious food makes all the work worthwhile. Please eat quickly, Young Master.”
“No.”
When I offered him chopsticks, Dan Mok Bi sharply turned his head away. I drooped my eyebrows like a puppy.
“Really not going to eat? I endured so much, imagining how you’d look while eating!”
“…”
Silent as an angry man just moments before, Dan Mok Bi slowly turned his head back at my words. Smiling brightly, I held out a piece of meat to him.
“Open wide—ah.”
His pupils seemed to tremble faintly before he obediently opened his mouth toward me.
It felt just like feeding a chick. I grinned and asked,
“Delicious?”
Chewing quietly, Dan Mok Bi murmured softly,
“What you made is tastier—the spicy stew and the bibim guksu.”
“Really?”
That made me a little happy. After all, I’d truly done my best to feed Dan Mok Bi.
As I watched his lips chew with a gentle smile, Baek Ho dashed over and tapped my back with a small front paw.
Give me some too! Don’t eat without me!
“Oh dear, of course! Shall I pick out only the white fish meat for you, Lord Baek Ho?”
What do you take me for! A great divine beast like me can expertly pick out bones even if you give me the whole fish!
Yes, yes, of course you can.
I placed a whole steamed fish dish before Baek Ho. Usually, he’d nap, claiming divine beasts didn’t need to eat what we ate—but today, even he must have found it appetizing.
As I gazed fondly at Baek Ho’s fluffy fur, I felt a prickling gaze on my cheek.
“Young Master, what is it? Should I fetch you something else?”
“It’s tasteless.”
“What? That can’t be!”
“It’s true. Tasteless. Yeon-ah, you try it.”
“How strange.”
Startled by Dan Mok Bi’s words, I picked up various dishes with my chopsticks and tasted them. But unlike what he said, everything was delicious.
‘Could I have made it too spicy for the Young Master?’
Since I’m not truly from the Central Plains, the seasoning and condiments I usually use must differ.
‘I should think about this carefully.’
With that thought, I seriously sampled this and that. Meanwhile, Dan Mok Bi and I somehow finished our meal amicably.
‘Oh dear, I think I ate more.’
With so many colorful dishes, my hands just kept reaching for more. Reluctantly forcing my lazy body up, I braced my knees.
“I’ll go brew some refreshing tea… oh?”
Just as I tried to stand, Dan Mok Bi wrapped both arms around my waist. I plopped down into his lap like I’d been pulled into an embrace.
Startled, I turned to look—and he buried his face against my back, whispering softly,
“Don’t ever go anywhere without telling me again.”
‘Oh dear, he really was frightened.’
I’d never seen Dan Mok Bi so withdrawn before. But considering his perspective, I understood—after all, the first servant he’d ever laughed and chatted with had suddenly vanished.
‘Ugh, Dan Mok Su, you villain. May a stone appear in your rice.’
Inwardly, I cursed the Dan Mok Sect’s Clan Head for treating Dan Mok Bi so harshly. Then, wrapping both hands over his, I replied,
“I promise. I’ll never leave you.”
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“Really?”
“Really.”
As I made my vow, the tension in his arms seemed to ease. I turned to face him and gave a gentle smile.
“If I disappear, it’ll surely be because some bad person took me. So you must come and rescue me.”
“…Of course.”
Dan Mok Bi’s lips, pressed tightly together in resolve, formed a sharp ‘ㅅ’ shape. Finding him unbearably cute, I giggled softly.
That’s why I didn’t notice.
“Are you close with the steward?”
“Huh? No? What closeness could there be?”
“What about that servant who spoke to you?”
“She’s a friend who shares my room. She must have worried when I disappeared.”
“Yeon-ah.”
“Yes?”
I didn’t realize there was an edge beneath Dan Mok Bi’s seemingly casual, ordinary questions.
“…It’s nothing.”
Dan Mok Bi’s dark eyes sank once more like a sky clouded over.
After Dan Mok Bi left, having taken such care of Yeon, a small commotion arose in the main hall. A warrior, who like the steward had come out to greet the Clan Head, asked the steward with a stiff face,
“Steward, did you see it?”
“…”
The steward stood frozen like stone, giving no reply. The warrior muttered awkwardly,
“When exactly did he grow so tall and robust? He even seems healthier than Young Master Dan Mok Chang…”
“Be quiet.”
Dan Mok Chang and Dan Mok Bi—their twin brotherhood wasn’t something easily spoken of.
The steward spoke heavily,
“I’ll inform the Clan Head myself.”
The second young master, Dan Mok Bi, who’d been so frail they thought he’d die soon.
‘But what was that inner strength I sensed earlier? That imposing aura…’
The steward wiped cold sweat from his hand.
The second young master, presumed near death, had grown so strong, while the first young master, expected to return as the world’s greatest, came back as thin as a skeleton.
‘What on earth is happening?’
Somehow, it felt like an omen of upheaval.
Yeon fell asleep quickly, likely from exhaustion.
Dan Mok Bi gently stroked her hair, gazing down at her face as if etching every detail onto his retina.
‘I thought my heart would drop out.’
No matter how long he waited in his quarters, Yeon never came. After a while, Baek Ho appeared and grumbled,
Must’ve been urgent—they dragged her off abruptly.
His words made Dan Mok Bi’s heart churn uneasily. Had the Sect finally reached out to Yeon too? Were they trying to take the one thing he still held onto?
If Baek Ho hadn’t stopped him, he would’ve stormed the main hall long ago. He’d endured three days, holding back only because Baek Ho assured him Yeon wasn’t in danger.
And during those three days, Dan Mok Bi realized with bone-deep clarity—
Just how special Yeon was to him.
Nights without Yeon were bitterly cold and frightening; meals alone without her tasted like chewing raw sand.
After enduring so long, he’d finally rushed out to bring Yeon back himself.
‘There was a Yeon I didn’t know—smiling warmly, chattering, being loved.’
She could shine brightly even without him.
Male lead first thought she played hard to get, only to realize she
really disliked him

Short intro:
What she can’t stand the most is the streets full of effeminate men, especially that so-called top beauty whom she avoids at all costs.
Shen Yaoxing looks at Jiang Mingyue, who keeps approaching her with coy shyness.
Shen Yaoxing: Bro, don’t be like this, I’m really about to throw up!
She fears nothing in heaven or earth, except for him getting close to her.
*
At first he thought she was just using the trick of feigning indifference to attract his attention. Later, he learned that she truly despised him.
This dealt a heavy blow to Jiang Mingyue, and he vowed to make her, like everyone else, fall at his feet in worship!
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Synopsis:
Before transmigrating, Shen Yaoxing only wanted to find a reliable man to spend her life with. Who knew that after transmigrating, she would become a reliable woman herself…
A forced misandrist, highly skilled, and reliable female lead
vs.
An initially aloof and arrogant, later morbid, obsessed male lead
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